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Friday, April 12, 2019

I am a soldier

I am lonely and sad, I miss my family.
I can see thick white grey smoke from the bombs.
I hate mud on my jacket and I can taste it when I run  and walk.
I can hear a grenade and a bomb when someone throws them
I can smell gunpowder when someone shoots.
I use a rifie and it bombs and a bullet comes out and makes the noise
I don't like wars because we shoot people and they shoot us
There is lots of blood everywhere on the land
I can touch a tank and it feels like metal and smooth

3 comments:

  1. Talofa Kyronae, my name is Kihira. I am from Red Hill School. I like your work Kyronae and I like. the way you used capital and lowercase letters correctly. I really like your Anzac photo and your spelling.

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  2. Hi my name is Niamh I love your post. I love I am a soldier it was very cool I like that you post a photo of that cross. I like your post because my grate gran dad was a soldier in that war .

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  3. Hi,I just looked at your comment and thank you for commenting Niamh and Kihira. The sad part was when they got shot at and they died and the family felt sorry for them and cried.Thank you so much.


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